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@  dr3ad : (17 October 2019 - 01:15 AM)

Added feature "Lookup retail NPC equipment" to the account panel for the upcoming item forge, can be seen on the right.

@  dr3ad : (16 October 2019 - 12:41 PM)

18 hours uptime. #record

@  dr3ad : (14 October 2019 - 08:56 PM)

Fixed some important performance issues, server back online

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Server is up again, fixed some crash issues.

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Server back online.

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Server up in 3 mins. Applied some fixes.

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Server has been started. Up in 3 mins.

@  dr3ad : (10 October 2019 - 09:47 PM)

5-10 mins downtime while we apply some changes

@  dr3ad : (10 October 2019 - 05:05 PM)

9 hours uptime #record. Thanks everyone for testing.

@  dr3ad : (09 October 2019 - 08:32 PM)

You can now spawn/create NPCs that have BFA Display ID without getting "Can't find NPC error" once you try to spawn NPC in-game.

@  dr3ad : (09 October 2019 - 02:57 PM)

Fixed restarter, server back online.

@  dr3ad : (09 October 2019 - 02:39 AM)

Added about 23k more .wmo gameobjects. Full list of gameobjects will be posted soon.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 07:20 PM)

Fixed .phase promote command and loading of phase ranks

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 06:36 PM)

BFA Races added to NPC template creation page.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 04:34 PM)

Fixed the "Failed to retrieve" password error that some people may have gotten in their web account panel. Check your panel again now.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 04:28 PM)

Also there's been a known issue with incorrectly copied TRP or TRP in general that gives you disconnect as soon as you login. If you have this issue try deleting TRP then logging back in.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 04:19 PM)

Added website feature "Fix character DC problem" in account panel which will fix characters that you get disconnected on when you login.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 03:45 PM)

.gob state command fixed, you can do .gob state 0 3 now to activate light gobs. Also fixed loading of gameobjects that already had state set previously. Effective on next restart.

@  dr3ad : (07 October 2019 - 08:00 PM)

RPH 735 has just been put up online if you wish to copy over some character related stuff to BFA. RPH 735 will be up for the next 48 hours. However you have to set new realmlist: SET portal "leg.rpheaven.org"

@  dr3ad : (07 October 2019 - 07:36 PM)

Another crash fixed


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#1 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 12:36 PM

Hello.

 

I'm looking for Beta readers for my book. The genre is Adventure, and its set in a low-fantasy Universe based on the Age of Sail and Pre-Roman/Christian Europe. The narrative is centered around the struggle of four pirates(man who could've guessed), and its based on years worth of events I've done on both Retail and RPH. A majority of the named characters are based on characters created and roleplayed by other people than me, even if I've tweaked some details to various degrees in some areas.

 

The page count is roughly 240 A5-pages, and around 50-60% of the content are dialogue. I intend to self-publish when the book is considered finished.

 

If you're interested in helping me out, I expect you to actually finish reading the book in a relatively short amount of time, and provide critical response. Good, bad, or just constructive, doesnt really matter.

 

To catch your interest, here is a short exerpt from chapter 5:

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check out my epic phases:

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do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

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Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

#2 Red Dorage

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 01:17 PM

is this a paid job


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#3 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 01:29 PM

is this a paid job

beta readers are commonly not paid, and because im relatively poor i dont intend to change that

there will be honorary rewards ofc, mention and free book included when its eventually published, but nothing monetary

its for people who like reading, giving their critical opinion and being able to impact a work


check out my epic phases:

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do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

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Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

#4 Red Dorage

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 01:32 PM

@Wo0d Glue what about free succs


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#5 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 01:33 PM

@Wo0d Glue what about free succs

ur already fucking my mom isnt that enough of a reward


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check out my epic phases:

1122

5012

 

do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

Spoiler

 



Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

#6 Gavinlad

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 02:12 PM

@Wo0d Glue i'm not a beta but i'll give it a read


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#7 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 02:28 PM

@Wo0d Glue i'm not a beta but i'll give it a read

i was long awaiting that joke...

add me on discord Wo0d Glue#4808


check out my epic phases:

1122

5012

 

do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

Spoiler

 



Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

#8 Icetorn

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 04:08 PM

am I in it


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Posted 15 December 2018 - 04:53 PM

2 lines into the sample and u already start vargfapping fkn cringe and ur vocabulary is poor so dont bother ur gonna write anything worthwhile


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#10 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 05:03 PM

ur vocabulary is poor

(srry english not first language)


check out my epic phases:

1122

5012

 

do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

Spoiler

 



Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 05:25 PM

u make excuses like that anoter reason u wont succeed in anything


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Posted 15 December 2018 - 07:20 PM

only if you pay for my reading lessons


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#13 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 15 December 2018 - 07:25 PM

only if you pay for my reading lessons

im poor so u need 2 buy the book first then i will


check out my epic phases:

1122

5012

 

do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

Spoiler

 



Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

#14 RoberTheForlorne

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Posted 03 January 2019 - 01:18 PM

So, I read the entire first book from our good boy Woodie, and I must say, that I really want the Second one. I'd be willing to pay for it.

My overall thoughts on the book would require others to read it to understand it, but it is basically set in a world which is quite uniquely built, with a very well fleshed out timeline beforehand, as well as different cultures and technologies to other books I've read. The book is heavily inspired by the 18th century and is concerned about the life of Pirates within this universe.

 

Of course, it's not always pirates, and there are many characters you can root or follow for. Hell, I had myself rooting for the bad guys of the story, of course, in this story you can't really call either side a bad guy, since the characters at the head of all the sides in this book have so many morals and goals of their own, that they can turn good and bad at any second and part of the story. You can find yourself following closely to the adventures of a peg-legged secretary girl out to find the truth about the death of her savior, or the tale of how a vengeful, old captain, loyal and patriotic, seeks to selfishly use his men to track down the man who had betrayed him. Or come to respect a pirate captain, who wishes to martyr himself in a blaze of glory, blood and gunpowder so that other pirates would look to him as an Idol, but even as he tries to have himself be killed, he fails at it, horribly, making his hole of depression deeper and deeper.

 

Stories like this within this overall story about a weapon that can tell the future, past and even present is what makes Woodie's book even better.

 

Good job, Wood Glue.

Buy his book.


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