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@  dr3ad : (17 October 2019 - 01:15 AM)

Added feature "Lookup retail NPC equipment" to the account panel for the upcoming item forge, can be seen on the right.

@  dr3ad : (16 October 2019 - 12:41 PM)

18 hours uptime. #record

@  dr3ad : (14 October 2019 - 08:56 PM)

Fixed some important performance issues, server back online

@  dr3ad : (13 October 2019 - 04:20 PM)

Server is up again, fixed some crash issues.

@  dr3ad : (12 October 2019 - 11:54 PM)

Server back online.

@  dr3ad : (12 October 2019 - 11:49 PM)

Server up in 3 mins. Applied some fixes.

@  dr3ad : (10 October 2019 - 09:49 PM)

Server has been started. Up in 3 mins.

@  dr3ad : (10 October 2019 - 09:47 PM)

5-10 mins downtime while we apply some changes

@  dr3ad : (10 October 2019 - 05:05 PM)

9 hours uptime #record. Thanks everyone for testing.

@  dr3ad : (09 October 2019 - 08:32 PM)

You can now spawn/create NPCs that have BFA Display ID without getting "Can't find NPC error" once you try to spawn NPC in-game.

@  dr3ad : (09 October 2019 - 02:57 PM)

Fixed restarter, server back online.

@  dr3ad : (09 October 2019 - 02:39 AM)

Added about 23k more .wmo gameobjects. Full list of gameobjects will be posted soon.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 07:20 PM)

Fixed .phase promote command and loading of phase ranks

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 06:36 PM)

BFA Races added to NPC template creation page.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 04:34 PM)

Fixed the "Failed to retrieve" password error that some people may have gotten in their web account panel. Check your panel again now.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 04:28 PM)

Also there's been a known issue with incorrectly copied TRP or TRP in general that gives you disconnect as soon as you login. If you have this issue try deleting TRP then logging back in.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 04:19 PM)

Added website feature "Fix character DC problem" in account panel which will fix characters that you get disconnected on when you login.

@  dr3ad : (08 October 2019 - 03:45 PM)

.gob state command fixed, you can do .gob state 0 3 now to activate light gobs. Also fixed loading of gameobjects that already had state set previously. Effective on next restart.

@  dr3ad : (07 October 2019 - 08:00 PM)

RPH 735 has just been put up online if you wish to copy over some character related stuff to BFA. RPH 735 will be up for the next 48 hours. However you have to set new realmlist: SET portal "leg.rpheaven.org"

@  dr3ad : (07 October 2019 - 07:36 PM)

Another crash fixed


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#1 RoberTheForlorne

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Posted 26 January 2019 - 05:55 PM

Title: "Diaspora" [SUBTITLE PENDING]

 

Overall Planned Plot and Lore: Finished

 

Chapters Finished: 5/Planned 30-35

 

Pages: A5, Each chapter Around 13 pages

 

Synopsis:

Fifteen long years have passed since the bloody Seventy Year War ended, and the power of the Obocrat of Perrion was broken. The Mon Keigh, High Humans, are the main power on the Continent of Diaspora, their Allfathers of a mighty Alliance, forged from War, holding sway over the land with an iron fist. The Low Kingdoms of the Doan Keigh face many hardships, as Estate owners, Earls, and leaders of various Guilds take their power to the streets of the wealthy trading Kingdoms, untouched by their so-called 'Protectors' or 'Citizen Councils'. The Lizardmen stay to their swamps, whispering of Death in the North, whilst half-man outcasts of the Mountain Kingdom of Lier begin to grow more and more in number within the cities of Man.

Amidst this chaos, Jorg, a young and ambitious man, braves the cold winter blizzards of the north to take his seat as an Earl of a Northern Town, but soon finds out that a mystery is afoot there. Elsewhere, in the Low Kingdom of the Vale, within the sprawling Metropolis of Darrowden, a young thief, Ysolda, seeks to steal a document that would get her wealth beyond imagination. But it proves to be a bigger catch than she anticipated, as events set in motion fifteen years ago, by a man called Aurelius, take place...

 

Hey guys, Thiccroy here. Much like Wood Glue, I am an avid writer and seek to create a book of my own, influenced by my knowledge of history and some aspects of popular culture and low, and high, fantasy. I already have some beta readers to see my work as it is, but I would like people who are truly interested in the setting and idea to take part in the reading of the drafts of my chapters.

 

To put the setting of Diaspora in layman's terms, it is a pseudo-realistic fantasy, or a high-low fantasy, as in there exists magic, various magical creatures and various different races apart from the natural Humans, but the world is rooted in its own cultures, histories, and conflicts, as the various races and Kingdoms fight for dominance, power or peace upon the supercontinent. All of the races in the story were once slaves of an alien race summoned to the World long ago, who enslaved them for a long time until the races banded together under an order of mages led by a legendary Human warrior, who died in the final battle to secure their freedom.

The story takes place way, way after that, and after a Seventy-year long global conflict, that saw many millions die, families and kingdoms torn apart and the rise of gunpowder, cannons, muskets, sails and various other technologies akin to the 16th, 17th century of our own world.

 

Do contact me on my Discord, Thiccroy#8129, to ask for an invite to the beta reader discord.

 

Sincerely,
Thiccroy.


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I am the thiccest.

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#2 The Beast

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Posted 26 January 2019 - 06:20 PM

Darrowden

Mon Keigh,

Lier

Lizardmen
 

glad to see you've started reading warhammer lore 


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#3 RoberTheForlorne

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Posted 26 January 2019 - 06:29 PM

 

glad to see you've started reading warhammer lore 

 

Mon keigh is the only Warhammer influence, the rest are actually things I made up. Some of my beta readers also caught on to me making various Elder Scrolls stuff in the Lore, despite me not knowing it. Call it subconscious or just a coincidence, or just call me a liar, but that's how it went.


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https://rpheaven.org...ndpost&p=164027
 

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#4 SalineSeas

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Posted 26 January 2019 - 11:42 PM

do you accept chad readers as well?


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#5 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 27 January 2019 - 01:11 AM

do you accept chad readers as well?

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check out my epic phases:

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do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

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Find me online on the following characters:
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The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
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#6 THE traius

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Posted 27 January 2019 - 01:46 AM

dips on omikron reader


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Posted 27 January 2019 - 07:36 AM

looking for alpha male readers



#8 RoberTheForlorne

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Posted 27 January 2019 - 09:17 AM

looking for alpha male readers

 

dips on omikron reader

Looking for real greek readers for my greek alphabet!


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https://rpheaven.org...ndpost&p=164027
 

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Posted 27 January 2019 - 11:57 AM

Imagine being a beta in 2019.


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Posted 27 January 2019 - 10:35 PM

come on guys it's current year

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Posted 30 January 2019 - 08:04 PM

read my son's book or suffer the immediate consequences(deadth)


check out my epic phases:

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do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

Spoiler

 



Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

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Posted 01 February 2019 - 04:45 AM

in which solturn do we begin reading



#13 Wo0d Glue

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Posted 01 February 2019 - 11:39 AM

in which solturn do we begin reading

are you sure this is how you want to go ahead son

new member of the community

posting half-assed shitposts...

maybe try to stake a claim on some interesting posts or reponses, maybe a good introduction thread, y'dig?

else you might just end up like all the other unfunny trolls without profile pictures


check out my epic phases:

1122

5012

 

do you like reading? why not become a beta reader for my epic book?

https://rpheaven.org...aders-for-book/

 

Short stories:

Character biographies:

Spoiler

 



Find me online on the following characters:
Freebooter - DM Character for The Golden Age

The Ugly - Character for Manifest Destiny
Woodglue - Building Character
DJ Pirate - Alt account

 

#14 reubenologist

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Posted 01 February 2019 - 11:42 AM

how many quad turns does that take



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Posted 03 February 2019 - 04:15 PM

There seems to be a bit of your usual viking influence in there too which seems to be prevalent in the vast majority of your works.

 

Other than that it looks fairly decent. The only thing I would suggest doing is adding a bit more original influences and perhaps influences from other mythologies as well to spice up your work a bit.

 

Anyway, keep up the good work.







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